H.a.r.a.n.g 하랑 [Love Received from God]
Title: H.a.r.a.n.g 하랑 [Love Received from God]
Author: /gabriella Agnes
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/baboracoon2/
Reviewer: lollipo princess @ My Sensation
`Story Title : 5/5Love your title!! Though I have no idea what it meant!! Great idea, having your title in another language!! Cool!!
`Appearance: 10/10Nice!! The poster is so cute!! The female lead looks awesome in the poster!! All smiles and all!! I really like your background too!! Fits the poster amazing well!!
`Forewords: 8/10You could have given a preview of other chapters to grab more attention and all!! Otherwise, it was all good!!
`Plot: 14/15Awesome plot!! So kawaii!! Haha!! Really original and unique!!
`Characterization: 9/10You did a really amazing job, bringing out the characters and all!!! Congrats!!
`Creativity/Originality : 9/10Your story is really unique!! Very different then the other fanfic out there!! Execelante!!
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 8/10Non major stuff here!! Just my advice to you is try using more flowery words!! To simple isn't good!! It kinda gets quite boring!!
`Flow : 8/10It wasn't to fast and all!! So that's is really good!! But some parts dragged to long!! So it kinda got a bit boring here and there!!
`Writing Style: 14/15Great!! It was easy to read and all!! Haha!!
`Overall Enjoyment : 5/5
`Bonus : 5/5
Overall Total: 95/100
Woah!! Congrats!! I think you are the first person I've reviewed that gotten such a high mark!! Good Luck !! ^^
Author: /gabriella Agnes
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/baboracoon2/
Reviewer: lollipo princess @ My Sensation
`Story Title : 5/5Love your title!! Though I have no idea what it meant!! Great idea, having your title in another language!! Cool!!
`Appearance: 10/10Nice!! The poster is so cute!! The female lead looks awesome in the poster!! All smiles and all!! I really like your background too!! Fits the poster amazing well!!
`Forewords: 8/10You could have given a preview of other chapters to grab more attention and all!! Otherwise, it was all good!!
`Plot: 14/15Awesome plot!! So kawaii!! Haha!! Really original and unique!!
`Characterization: 9/10You did a really amazing job, bringing out the characters and all!!! Congrats!!
`Creativity/Originality : 9/10Your story is really unique!! Very different then the other fanfic out there!! Execelante!!
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 8/10Non major stuff here!! Just my advice to you is try using more flowery words!! To simple isn't good!! It kinda gets quite boring!!
`Flow : 8/10It wasn't to fast and all!! So that's is really good!! But some parts dragged to long!! So it kinda got a bit boring here and there!!
`Writing Style: 14/15Great!! It was easy to read and all!! Haha!!
`Overall Enjoyment : 5/5
`Bonus : 5/5
Overall Total: 95/100
Woah!! Congrats!! I think you are the first person I've reviewed that gotten such a high mark!! Good Luck !! ^^
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