The end

Title: The End
Author: UnknownViet
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/end/
Reviewer: Elena@ My Sensation

Reviewer's Note: This review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding with the author or anything of that sort. This a honest review on a story. I'm seriously sorry if I'm harsh or rude.
`Story Title : 4/5*Your title was suitable with your storyline.
`Appearance : 7/10*I was attracted to your story because it was different. Usually the end is at the end but you placed the end of your story at the beginning.
`Forewords : 6/10*Your forewords were pretty goo. Next time, be sure to analyse your forewords for spelling errors.
`Plot : 10/15*Your plot was rather refreshing. I liked it a lot.
`Characterisation : 4/10*Your characterisation was poor. Please add more specifications on your characters.
`Creativity/Originality : 6/10*Your creativity was limited in the storyline. The plot was not cliche but it does have a common basis.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 6/10*I liked your vocabulary. There were some spelling and typing mistakes.
`Flow : 6/10*Most one-shot stories does not have a balanced flow but your story was pretty okay.
`Writing Style : 10/15*Your writing style was common and fine.
`Overall Enjoyment : 4/5`Total : 63/100
`Bonus : 5/5
Overall Total: 68/100