Stavolta

Title: Stavolta

URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/Reminiscence05/

Author: BoBoLi0us

Reviewer: dramafreak4eva @ Mysensation


`Story Title: 4/5

- Wow, I loved the title, very eye catchy for sure!


`Appearance: 8/10

- I liked your poster as it was beautiful and it did suit the mood.


`Forewords: 6/10

- Your forewords was good. It really did made me want to read on.


`Plot: 14/15

- I really liked the plot you had. It was simple and easy.


`Characterization: 9/10

- The characterization was good, but I really didn’t understand the characters clearly.


`Creativity/Originality]: 9/10

- It was creative and original! It was fabulous! It wasn’t derived from something else.


`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10

- There were a few mistakes here and there but they were minor. Your vocab was fine as of your grammar.


`Flow: 7/10

- The flow was alright but the ending was a bit too hurried. More information at the end would have been better.


`Writing Style: 13/15

- Your writing style was great! It was very easy to understand what you were saying and explaining.


`Overall Enjoyment: 3/5


`Total : 80/100

`Bonus : 2/5

You requested from Mysensation

I did enjoy reading the fanfic.

Overall Total: 82/100