The Edge of Sanity
Title: The Edge of Sanity
Author: Jian You
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jianyou2/
Reviewer: jwyl
`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : -5/5
I found this title to be mysterious and eye catching. This title gave me a tingly feeling, telling me that I should read it.
`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -9/10
I really like the poster. It’s really eye catching, once again. And I love Jaejoong, so that’s a plus. But I didn’t really like the blood being splattered as the background. It made it seem a bit messy.
`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : -8/10
It’s interesting, but I found it a bit too short. But nonetheless, it made me want to read the story and find out what happens next.
`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : -14/15.
OMG. That was actually kinda scary, not going to lie. I was freaking out when she Jaejoong was eating the girl’s flesh. That woman is a monster! What the… ewwwwwww. Seriously, If I didn’t know better, I’d think you were a psycho. But yes, it was well done. But just gross…
`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : -8/10
I was able to tell that the girl was a complete psycho! And that Jaejoong is just another normal guy.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : -8/10
Killing your own husband? I’ve seen that around a couple times. But it was quite intriguing.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : -10/10
I don’t think I found anything wrong with this part. All the spelling, grammar, vocabulary was right.
`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : -10/10.
I’ve got to say, the flow was well written indeed. So, I don’t have much to say about this part.
`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : -13/15
For me, I don’t like horror stories, so you made it really scary to me. I don’t like it. Sorry. But it was still good.
`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : -1/5
It’s too scary for me, and I did not like the fact that you killed Jaejoong in such a horrifying way. I love Jaejoong. So, you not liking DBSK, I didn’t feel all that happy. I like happy endings, not scary, deadly endings.
`Total : -86/100
`Bonus : -0/5
Overall Total: -86/100
Author: Jian You
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jianyou2/
Reviewer: jwyl
`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : -5/5
I found this title to be mysterious and eye catching. This title gave me a tingly feeling, telling me that I should read it.
`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -9/10
I really like the poster. It’s really eye catching, once again. And I love Jaejoong, so that’s a plus. But I didn’t really like the blood being splattered as the background. It made it seem a bit messy.
`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : -8/10
It’s interesting, but I found it a bit too short. But nonetheless, it made me want to read the story and find out what happens next.
`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : -14/15.
OMG. That was actually kinda scary, not going to lie. I was freaking out when she Jaejoong was eating the girl’s flesh. That woman is a monster! What the… ewwwwwww. Seriously, If I didn’t know better, I’d think you were a psycho. But yes, it was well done. But just gross…
`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : -8/10
I was able to tell that the girl was a complete psycho! And that Jaejoong is just another normal guy.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : -8/10
Killing your own husband? I’ve seen that around a couple times. But it was quite intriguing.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : -10/10
I don’t think I found anything wrong with this part. All the spelling, grammar, vocabulary was right.
`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : -10/10.
I’ve got to say, the flow was well written indeed. So, I don’t have much to say about this part.
`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : -13/15
For me, I don’t like horror stories, so you made it really scary to me. I don’t like it. Sorry. But it was still good.
`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : -1/5
It’s too scary for me, and I did not like the fact that you killed Jaejoong in such a horrifying way. I love Jaejoong. So, you not liking DBSK, I didn’t feel all that happy. I like happy endings, not scary, deadly endings.
`Total : -86/100
`Bonus : -0/5
Overall Total: -86/100
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