Kidnapped

Kidnapped by Shin
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/ShinShin_5/
Reviewed by Sparkly1996@mysensation

Story Title: 4/5
I feel the title is kinda of short but a good title

Appearance: 7/10
You didn't have a background.

Foreword: 10/10
I like the foreword. It is interesting and it reels readers in.

Plot: 14/15
It's really good but I don't think the beginning was very realistic

Characterization: 10/10
LOVE the characters!!

Creativity/Originality: 9/10
It is very creative. I just think that being kidnapped just for healing isn't very creative though.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
There are some grammar mistakes but not many.

Flow: 8/10
Sometimes it's not flowing well.

Writing Style: 14/15
Sometimes the writing style is not that good.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Subtotal:90/100

Bonus: 2/5
I haven't read many stories with such a detailed description of an optimistic and happy girl.

Total: 92/100