We Will End Up Together

We Will End Up Together

http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jie_jie3/

Reviewed by Sparkly1996@mysensation

Story Title: 4/5
The title doesn't really fit the story.

Appearance: 10/10
I LOVE the appearance.

Foreword: 10/10
You nailed everything that should be in a foreword.

Plot: 15/15
The plot is very good.

Characterization: 10/10
The characterization is very good.

Creativity/Originality: 7/10

I know some stories that are very similar to yours.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
There are some grammar mistakes.

Flow: 10/10
It is flowing very well

Writing Style: 12/15
You make it sound like a movie and not a story.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Subtotal: 91/100
Bonus: 5/5
Your stories are the greatest. You are my idol!!!

Total: 96/100